I really love your poem. I can relate to your experiences that you talk about in your poem. In a way, it's like you kind of understood what I'm and other people are like(not the personal experiences) inside. That's kind of how your poem can be relatable to others. You poem sounds nostalgic, but at the same time in the present.
Great poem. I understood what I was reading and I felt how you feel. This really shows your personality as well. I can learn about how your life is like. You really are showing your passion. Great job!
I learned more about you while reading your poem. You explain really well, and I liked how you were really specific. Your pictures were really cool and you used pictures from a while ago too. Good Job.
I can not simply express how much I love your poetry. It seems to me, you poured part of your soul into your writing. As a friend of yours, I truly see your character seeping through the poem. I still can not seem to get over the fact of how much your hair grew since you were little. -Maria
I really love your poem this week. You talked with passion and that you were really letting people come into your life in a way with no judging. great job
I really like your blog. I learned a lot more about you. I actually learned that we both like FOB. It seems like poetry comes to you naturally. You're poem is also very relatable, like "but you never listen to me". I really loved your poem. Ps. You were a cute little baby c:
You did a fantastic job because you compared your life to recent events and past events. I think your life experience of winning the Steve Jobs award truly effected how you wrote this poem. For example you compare yourself to an apple computer because of that award. I liked how much love your house even though you describe your house as old. Is the picture of the girl with the drawn smile you? Excellent Blog Post.
I like how you related to modern things in the beginning like computers. It sounded like you where one in the poem as I read it got better and better. Like the ending "and a house I like to call home".
I really love your poem. I can relate to your experiences that you talk about in your poem. In a way, it's like you kind of understood what I'm and other people are like(not the personal experiences) inside. That's kind of how your poem can be relatable to others. You poem sounds nostalgic, but at the same time in the present.
ReplyDeleteI think the life experiences that you had effect the poem in a way that determines the seriousness of the poem and your life experiences.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem. I understood what I was reading and I felt how you feel. This really shows your personality as well. I can learn about how your life is like. You really are showing your passion. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI learned more about you while reading your poem. You explain really well, and I liked how you were really specific. Your pictures were really cool and you used pictures from a while ago too. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteI can not simply express how much I love your poetry. It seems to me, you poured part of your soul into your writing. As a friend of yours, I truly see your character seeping through the poem. I still can not seem to get over the fact of how much your hair grew since you were little. -Maria
ReplyDeleteI really love your poem this week. You talked with passion and that you were really letting people come into your life in a way with no judging. great job
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ReplyDeleteI really like your blog. I learned a lot more about you. I actually learned that we both like FOB. It seems like poetry comes to you naturally. You're poem is also very relatable, like "but you never listen to me". I really loved your poem.
Ps. You were a cute little baby c:
You did a fantastic job because you compared your life to recent events and past events. I think your life experience of winning the Steve Jobs award truly effected how you wrote this poem. For example you compare yourself to an apple computer because of that award. I liked how much love your house even though you describe your house as old. Is the picture of the girl with the drawn smile you? Excellent Blog Post.
ReplyDeleteI like how you related to modern things in the beginning like computers. It sounded like you where one in the poem as I read it got better and better. Like the ending "and a house I like to call home".
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